Tuesday, November 30, 2010

The courage

"Courage is being scared to death... and saddling up anyway" - John Wayne


The word courage has its root in the latin word for heart; cor. Courage flows from the beating heart, that wants to live in spite of fear. David Mamet argues that the most important thing the actor brings to the character is their own courage. This will give the character life; a real, living heart, so to speak, to the otherwise artificial and non-existent person.


The actor's primary virtue has always been courage. The simple act of standing in front of an audience demands courage in itself, even if you by disposition crave it and are driven to do it. One of the best pieces of advice I ever received was to connect with actors, if I wanted to write drama. As a writer, you might think you are the brain, but without the heart you are worth nothing.


After my return to Denmark, I attend more theatre performances and I meet more actors. Two of the recent performances I saw reminded me of the importance of courage. One was a grotesque, semi-spex version of Chaplin's The Gold Rush put on stage to buffoon the makers own desire to be political correct. The whole performance breathes with courage; it hides nothing, uses all the most simple, old tricks, never tries to be clever, and that is why it works so well. The courage of the performers convince. The other performance I saw was cleverly made, well-designed and full of new tricks, but in the directing and in some of the crucial parts, it lacked courage. It never left the stage. It was impressive, but without heart.


The same goes for writing and designing drama. Better to have courage than to be clever and perfect. Practice the discipline of sensing if your impulses are controlled by fear or inspired by courage and desire. I have a bunch of tricks and questions I treat myself to in the process. Like:

"What is the worst thing that could happen now?"

"- for the character?"

"- for me as a writer?"

"What is the worst possible idea I can come up with to solve this problem?"

- I leave the script and take a walk, while trying to sense and answer to: "What do I really, really want, no, not just want, but desire, crave? What can I imagine that will give me a kick?"


As writers, we have the time to reflect and ponder, so what I really admire about the courage of actors, is that they do it on stage in real time - they follow their impulses even when they know it might lead the performance astray from the planned (that is; when they do it, and not when they are just playing safe). Both in acting and writing, its the true moments of courage, where someone let go of all that is safe and well-known and take those steps into uncertainty, those are the moments, which truly touches us as an audience.

Thursday, March 11, 2010

“Not just because..”

Drama is essentially an examination of what people want and what they will do to get it. This seems to be the basic mechanics of the good scene or script.

Ask what your characters want and how they go about getting it. This is the fundamental tool to make weak scenes better.

Always.

Say it out loud: Always.

Now repeat it, while hitting yourself in the head, lest you should forget it.


Your best friend, the actor.

Because writers often forget it (and don’t even get me started on the directors, whom so easily get lost in their ‘visuals’). The scenes are then weak. You end up writing something else than drama, pure expo, narration or even poetry. Maybe we get lucky and the director and/or especially the actors have plenty of dramatic instinct to infuse the scene with drama. Despite the weak scene, the actors will somehow play their characters with lots of intention. This is the hallmark of the natural actor, not being able to play without clear and present intention, no matter what ‘method’ or technique they think they are applying as actors, this is fundamentally their craft, as it is ours. So learn from them. Speak your own lines. Find the intention. Feel it. Its in the body. Not the mind. That’s why you need actors. They have bodies. Physical bodies. Authors of novels don’t need them, so in their writing they can be lyrical, reflective and even acadmic. We can’t. The actor is our siamese twin and we can’t live without them. Hell, we shouldn’t even want to.


Our profession: Existential paradise

This examination of want and will demands a certain portion of cynicism from us as creators. By ‘a certain cynicism’, I’m not thinking of a bleak outlook on life, but rather a questioning, not-taking-anything-at-face-value-attitude. Peel off the illusions to better create the illusion of a drama.

Nothing is ever ‘just because’; just because he is a good man, just because that’s how the story is, just because that’s how reality is.

No, the young man is helping the woman because he wants something. What does he want? To be considered a hero? To make her fall in love with him? To forget about his own problems?

No, a story never just is. Its always a choice. At the outset, you might be making a lot of unconscious choices, just to get going, but at some point, you need to examine your choices. Are there better choices to make? More interesting? Daring? Never accept your story at face value, just because.

OK, reality is, just because it is. But you are not constructing reality. It might remind us of reality or it might be an altogether different reality from mine. So, yes, we are back at the choices. How is the world and reality of your drama?

That’s your decisions, and you have to make them. That’s how you construct drama. Satré would be in paradise (and btw, he wrote a few decent plays himself).


This is one of the most important 'tricks' in our tool-box: Never stop being the child who asks “Why?” and the child who observes the emperor and exclaims: “But he’s not wearing any clothes!”

Wednesday, December 16, 2009

A script workshop in Copenhagen

I have been asked to do a script-workshop for teaterHUSET in Copenhagen, beginning January '10.

Her kan du læse TeaterHUSETs præsentation:

Manus Workshop – vil du blive bedre til at skrive?
Det er nemt at blive forvildet i skoven af dramaturgiske modeller. Manuskriptforfatter
Troels Christian Jakobsen arbejder med en række enkle principper, der går forud for
modellerne, og som kan hjælpe den skrivende til et bedre overblik. Det er i virkeligheden
ret enkelt at skrive dramatik, hvis det ikke lige var fordi, vi nemt gør det temmelig svært for
os selv og hinanden.
Hver session begynder med en introduktion til dagens emne, efterfulgt af samtale med
deltagerne om deres eget skrivearbejde, som kan være et eget manus eller skriveopgaver
stillet af workshop-lederen. Det betyder at workshoppen både er for folk, der er igang med
skrive egne manus, og folk der har brug for nogle udfodringer til at komme igang med at
skrive.

De 7 workshops har følgende overskrifter:
1. Principperne:
Intro til de grundlæggende principper for dramatik: konflikt, tonalitet, karakter, mysteriet og
enhed. Plus nogle noter om proces.
2. Struktur:
Intro til at arbejde med en fleksibel akt-struktur med udgangspunkt i en almen 4-akts-
model. Plus lidt mere om proces.
3. Konflikt:
Konflikt er grundstoffet i dramatik, men betydningen overses ofte.
4. Tonalitet:
Hvilken toneart eller genre er vigtig for hvordan et drama konstrueres. Alt begynder med
de to grundlæggende, komplementære genrer; komedien og tragedien.
5. Karakter:
I det gamle spørgsmål om hvorvidt karakter eller plot er vigtigst, må svaret principielt set
være: karakteren.
6. Mysteriet:
Drama har sit udspring i religiøse mysterier og spiller stadig en vigtig rolle ved
konstruktionen af drama.
7. Enhed:
Aristoteles talte om stedets, tidens og handlingens enhed - og det holder stadig som
princip.

Troels Christian Jakobsen er uddannet på Dramatikeruddannelsen i ’96 og har lige siden
arbejdet inden for teater, TV og film, både som manusforfatter, dramaturg og instruktør.
Han har især arbejdet en hel del med udvikling af nye stykker og manuskriptudvikling til
spillefilm, de seneste 4 år i Grækenland.

Tid: Torsdage d.21.januar, 28.januar, 4.februar, 11.februar, 18.februar, 25.februar og
4.marts 2010. Hver torsdag kl.19-22.
Sted: Dramatoriet
Pris: 1000 kr.
Deltagere: 6 personer.
Tilmelding: Senest 13.januar 2010
Tilmeld dig nu til projekt@teater-huset.dk. Erfaring er ikke påkrævet. Skriv om du vil
arbejde med et manuskript, du allerede har gang eller om du mere har lyst til at blive
kastet ud i øvelser.


Anden henvendelse til:
Liv Helm
, Projektkoordinator
TeaterHUSET

Rådhusstræde 13

1466 København K

Tlf: 35102522

Sunday, November 15, 2009

The Joke

I believe creating scripts for drama is one of the more difficult things you can undertake. One reason is that a script is essentially build upon one joke, and you have to make everything relate to that joke. You have to keep this simplicity in mind while creating a complex world around it. Often a script fails because it looses aim of it's joke or repeats the joke over and over without any complexity. I use the term joke, because of its simplicity, but could also talk about dramatic irony, the inner mystery or

So what is a joke. Here are some examples.
Silence of the Lambs: Starling hopes she can make the lambs stop screaming by saving the girl from Buffalo Bill, but she can't.
Seventh Seal: The Knight has lost all faith, but in facing the most meaningless of all, Death, he finds a new faith.
Sixth Sense: Crowe, the main character, believes he is supposed to save the boy, when in fact its the boy, who can save him.
Last Tango in Paris: The Brando-character has lost all faith in love because of his dead wife's betrayal, and takes out his despair on a young woman in a nihilistic sexual relationship. The joke is that he rediscovers love, but too late - death has been invited into the relationship and the young woman kills him to his big surprise.

When I work on my own scripts, I always stay in notebook-mode, collecting ideas, writing a few lines, arranging the rough structure, until I have a firm hold on the joke. Only then can I progress to treatment or script. In my work as a consultant, I have seen too many times, writers and directors setting out to write their script without a solid idea of their joke. The result is always what I call an unfinished script, even if it gets produced.

Sunday, November 8, 2009

Back in CPH

I have returned to Copenhagen to find better paying jobs as a scriptwriter - and right away TV2, the second largest TV station in DK, had a public tender for a prime-time mini-series for 12-year olds and their families. Episode length 25 minutes, episode budget 200.000 euro. I have turned in two concepts. "Murder of Four", roughly translated from Danish (where murder is 'morder' and mother is 'mor' - so the title has a wordplay in Danish, as well as a link to a very popular feature film series from the 60s called "Father of four") - this is a crime story where four kids have to prove their mothers innocence. The other concept is a fantasy thing - a kind of ET story, but with supernatural creatures.

"Murder of Four" already has a producer attached, the danish company Thura Film. The fantasy-concept is still looking for a producer.

In mid November TV2 will call in a selection of projects for a pitch session. Based on that, they'll choose 3-4 projects to begin development - each handed roughly 7000 euro to write a first episode and story-line for the following two episodes. Of those 3-4 projects they will eventually choose one to be produced later in summer 2010.

Friday, July 3, 2009

ATHENS SCRIPT WORKSHOP

Over the summer The Athens Script Workshop will appear in a new form.

Daily 2 hour sessions will be held at Ianos on Stadiou 24 in the cafe from 4 to 6 pm. It begins Monday the 6th of July and will continue for 8 weeks.

Mondays: Introduction to script creation.
Introduces my view on drama and the creation of scripts. Participation free of charge.

Tuesdays: Principles of drama.
We talk about the basic principles of drama with examples of how they work and how to work with them.

Wednesdays: Toolbox.
After principles, we look at tools for better writing, like act models, creative methods and simple tricks.

Thursdays: Writing exercises.
Based on principles and the toolbox writing exercises to develop your understanding of them.

Fridays: Your writing.
We take a look at the participants own writing, either a project or your exercise-writing. Your choice.

The setting will be informal, discussion is welcomed and participation is flexible - meaning you only have to show up for the type of session you find useful.

Payment follows this simple form. Enrollment: 50 €. After that: 5 € per session you participate in.

If you have questions about the workshop email me. You can find my email address in my profile.

Monday, June 15, 2009

THE GREEK FILM MIRACLE!!!

Isn't that a headline we all would like to see in the world news? Greece possesses many of the elements to create such a miracle - and what's more, because of it's proud heritage of ancient drama, myth and epic, the world would be ready to embrace it.

In my mother country, Denmark, such a miracle took place throughout the '90s and is still more or less going on. The international film world suddenly noticed this little country with just above 5 million inhabitants. Lars von Trier's films, Festen by Thomas Vinterberg and many other films became export articles for the international market. But even more amazing, but less well-known, is that in the home market Danish films are consistently able to go head to head with Hollywood productions at the box office - as maybe the only European country. In any given week of the year you will find several Danish films in the top 10 of sold tickets, often ahead of American blockbusters.

What already exist in Greece is a dedicated film audience - the Greeks love cinema - and as any other nation, they like to see film in their own language, dealing with conflicts of their own culture. But on a regular basis Greek films fail to garner a real audience. There is the occasional Greek hit film, but it is too little. Every month of the year should feature a new Greek hit film - a hit with audiences and/or critics. So what's wrong here? Greece has both quality actors, cinematographers, directors, set designers and so on. In my eyes there are only two really weak links in the Greek film industry - the script and the production. And I believe that by focusing intensely on improving these two factors, Greek film could turn itself into a miracle of European cinema.

For Denmark the miracle was a great thing, not only for national pride, but also for the national budget. Money was made in more than one way. And when the Socialdemocrats, who had helped the miracle happen by advancing the state's financial support for film development and production, lost government power and was replaced by a right-wing government led by a party, whose ideology included a belief in a minimal state, there were people in the film industry who feared the celebration would come to an abrupt end. Because for a small nation like Denmark (and Greece) it is imperative for the film industry to have the state share a part of the risk of developing and producing films, as we can never establish multi-billion dollar studios like in Hollywood, who are able to carry the full burden of risk.

Luckily the new right-wing government in Denmark quickly realized that we now live in a world were the so-called creative industries become rapidly more important for the economy of a developed nation. Even though oil and other natural resources are still important, it is non-depletable creative commodities like films, music, novels and theatre which can add to and maintain a nations competitiveness. Apart from the immediate financial gain, they are invaluable in building the image of the nation, as well as to help to attract companies and highly skilled professionals in fields of IT, finance and medico-industries to choose the country as their place of operation. The old global powers arose by wealth of hard resources like oil and minerals supported by the hard power of military, the new global players wield soft power in the form of culture, knowledge and economics. In Denmark, a nation almost devoid of natural resources, this is understood better than anywhere else.

Greece is in a better position than almost any country I can think of to ultimately harvest the full gain of such an image-boost from a film miracle. First because the Greek nation has it's proud ancestry - it is as a matter of fact the place where western drama was invented - which means that the idea of a Greek film miracle, once it it happens, will be even stronger and convincing in the minds of the rest of the world. Secondly because one of the main industries is tourism - and even though it is nice for Greece that the new ABBA-film takes place on Skopelos, and Captain Corellis' Mandolin was filmed on Kefallonia, these films are not Greek, and therefore they don't really add much to an authentic image and branding of Greece as an exciting place to live, work, have fun and vacation. (As a side-note its worth to mention that Denmark's attractiveness as tourist destination has been steadily climbing since the film miracle happened - and this in a country who has much less to offer in terms of sunshine and amazing landscapes).

In the 80s no one was at all excited by Danish films, and if anyone had said that in 10 years there would be talk of a Danish film miracle, it would had been met by laughter or ridicule. In Greece I have often met an attitude, that something like the Danish film miracle could never happen here - for hundreds of different reasons. But guess what, in Denmark it didn't happen by itself. And it didn't happen just because the state gave some more money in support. It mainly happened because The Danish Film Institute and a string of clever new producers understood that the script is the all-determining factor for the success of a film - blockbuster or art-house. And because the producers understood to cooperate, despite being competitors, realizing that being in a small country, they had more to think of themselves as parts of bigger whole, than just small kings with each their small kingdom. And when it started happening they could gradually produce more and more films each year, making it possible for a greater group of directors to actually shoot a feature film more than once per 5 years - which in turn made them better and more confident directors - and the self-generating circle of success had begun. As it is now in Greece my guess is that most of the younger talented directors are just thinking about making one film in Greece that will make them get away from Greece and all the way to Hollywood or some other place of greater promise. It's up to the producers and politicians to make them wish to stay.

To do this the Greek Film Center and the greek producers need to invest heavily in script development. Create a pool of professional scriptwriters by educating them and paying them for any kind of work they do - also for synopses, treatments and scripts that doesn't get produced. Make any director who is not obviously talented at writing understand that they need a scriptwriter - if they don't understand this, simply tell them their film will not be produced without a solid script. This is of major importance: Stop producing films with weak scripts. Simply stop - invest the money in more scripts. Have far too many scripts in development. Every time you plan to produce one film, develop 10 scripts. One successful film will pay for the 9 other scripts. The script is the foundation for successful films - and the brilliant script doesn't just spring from divine inspiration, or a famous book or the mind of strong visual director - the brilliant script arises from a dedication to examine and resolve conflicts by adhering to a strict logic of drama. And that dedication and that logic was invented here - reclaim it.

The Greeks are wonderful people, full of life and therefore drama and stories. They are both tremendously proud, but also at times openly ashamed of their nation. I believe this gives a unique position to be the new century's cinematic storytellers, as we are entering a period where the kind of American blindness to own weaknesses are becoming increasingly out-of-fashion, even with a mainstream audience. Greek film producers and visionary politicians, who understands the value of cultural policy in the new world of soft power, need to come together and create the circumstances to unleash the Greek Film Miracle.